When you write count how many letters in that.
This will read like the script for Who's on First Base? unless I spell it out for you.
When you edit your manuscript kill 'that' - just shoot them or as many as you can like they are sitting ducks at a shooting gallery in the fun park.
You can in the main live without them.
And now that I have spilled the beans, I will start on the next no no.
Put the word THERE on your hit list.
There is no point in starting a sentence with There.
There was a worm called squish. He got squashed.
Instead:
A worm called squish got squashed. Isn't that better, more direct and cleaner?
Saturday, May 23, 2009
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2 comments:
Good advice :)
Penny, dahling, how ya doin?
miss ya.
Love the writing advice, Miss Penny!
Lotsa love,
Kathy V in NM
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